Verb Mood
She requires that all of her children are to churn butter
Command Subjunctive
Bossy Verb + that + Subject + Command Subjunctive
Requires + that + Children + Churn
Command Subjunctive
= Bare form (no "to" in infinitive)
Idiom
resulting from this daily chore, the children have formidable biceps
Resulting from = idiom error
As a result of = correct
2. If I was the owner of our building, I would demand, under threat of eviction, that you should cease playing your djembe at all hours
Verb Mood
If I was the owner of our building
Hypothetical Subjunctive
- As if, As though, If (except for If, Then cases)
- Use "Were" for "To Be Verb"
- Was = To Be Verb
Correct: If I were the owner of our building...
I would demand... that you should cease playing your djembe at all hours
Command Subjunctive
Bossy Verb + that + Subject + Command Subjunctive
Demand + that + you + cease
Command Subjective
= Bare Form (No SHOULD CEASE, just CEASE)
3. After the president of the college worried publicly about the sharp drop in the value of its endowment, the head of faculty suggested that they initiate a fundraising campaign immediately.
Its = possessive pronoun
They = ???
One way to fix it is to replace it with the noun you want to refer to.
*Deadly five: Its, It, They, Them, Their
4. As being the world's top collector of empty vitamin bottles, Mrs. Simpson has ten times as many bottles in her robust and famous collection than does Mr. Flanders, a mere hobbyist.
Idioms
As Being = wrong
As (Without the Being) the world's top collector =in the role of
As Many... As
5. Between my two brothers, Salvatore is the most intelligent. Between my three sisters, Julia is the most clever.
Comparison
2 people = Between = Comparative Form
Comparative Form = More Intelligent
3 people (three sisters) = Among = Superlative Form
Superlative Form = Most Clever
21. Timmy on expresses affection for this dog, Lassie; as a result, Lassie only eats top-shelf dog food.
Idiom
24. Mr. Vega's mother noticed that a button was falling off his coat and that his clothes were in a general state of disrepair, so he was advised by her to fix the coat.
26. Once you show her the ropes, Josephina's natural skill as a salesperson will allow her to run the store by herself in no time.
Modifier
Noun Modifier (Type: Conjunction): Once you show her the ropes
Modified noun: Touch Rule, Possessives (Josephina's natural skill, not Josephina)
Pronouns/Nouns
Noun: Josephina's natural skill as a sales person
Pronouns: her, herself --> Cannot modify Josephina's
Corrected Version:
27. Alexander the Great remarked that conquering foreign states couldn't compare to the vanquishing of his enemies at home.
Parallelism - Simple Gerund Vs Complex Gerund
Parallel marker: Compare to
Parallel marker: Compare to
Simple Gerund (nouns on the outside, verbs on the inside): conquering foreign states
Complex Gerund (nouns through and through):
Article + ing verb form + of prepositional phrase
The + Vanquish-in + Of his enemies at home
Reasoning: Simple gerund cannot be parallel to complex gerund
28. Us attending the conference is dependent on our pilot receiving clearance to take off.
Verb Tense
Present Participles: Attending & Receiving
Complex Gerund (nouns through and through):
Article + ing verb form + of prepositional phrase
The + Vanquish-in + Of his enemies at home
Reasoning: Simple gerund cannot be parallel to complex gerund
28. Us attending the conference is dependent on our pilot receiving clearance to take off.
Verb Tense
Present Participles: Attending & Receiving
Present participles = ing forms
- used to modify nouns, verbs, or even whole clauses
29. The highly-advanced robot is proficient both in Japanese and English - and there is an expectation by us that the new model should be produced only in limited quantities for maintaining the product's cachet.
Idioms
The highly-advanced robot is proficient both in Japanese and English
Parallelism marker/Idiom - both x and y (must be parallel)
- both IN Japanese and IN English
- in both Japanese and English
Corrected: The highly-advanced robot is proficient in both Japanese and English
Passive Voice: and there is an expectation by us
Corrected active voice: We expect that
Verb Tense: that the new model should be produced only in limited quantities
Corrected Verb Tense: will be
Meaning: for maintaining the product's cachet
Corrected meaning: In order to maintain the product's cachet
31. My mother considers my vegetarianism as an insult to her cooking - it seems like she is obsessed with convincing me to try the rack of lamb.
Idioms:
Considers X as Y
Considers + my vegetarianism + as + an insult to her cooking
Corrected: Considers X Y
Considers + my vegetarianism + an insult to her cooking
Corrected Verb Tense: will be
Meaning: for maintaining the product's cachet
Corrected meaning: In order to maintain the product's cachet
31. My mother considers my vegetarianism as an insult to her cooking - it seems like she is obsessed with convincing me to try the rack of lamb.
Idioms:
Considers X as Y
Considers + my vegetarianism + as + an insult to her cooking
Corrected: Considers X Y
Considers + my vegetarianism + an insult to her cooking
36. Peter thinks he can swim fast like Michael Phelps does; he has also claimed to be an unrecognized world champion of sports like sprinting and boxing.
Type: Comparisons. How do we tell? With comparison signals: Like, Unlike, As, Than
Comparison signal here: LIKE
What is it comparing?
Clause/Verb: Swim fast, Does
37. Since 1973, the record was broken eight times due to technology that advanced even more rapidly than commentators have predicted.
Since = From past to present (Use perfect tense)
Since.... Has Been (present tense) Broken, has advanced (present perfect)
Commentators predicted (happened before the breaking of records) = Use Past Perfect
Past Perfect = HAD Predicted
38. My child has better hygiene than those of my sister; neither of her boys ever seem to wash their hands.
Demonstrative pronouns: This, That, Those, These
Remember, for THAT and THOSE: Can be used as adjectives OR new copy
What's new copy? Same thing of a new antecedent
Must also agree in number
My child has better hygiene than those of my sister
What's the problem here? It doesn't agree in number. We mean to refer to my sister's boys.
Also remember, for This and These: Means the exact same antecedent


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